the very last drop

*confessions in a nappy bag ( nappyconfessions.blogspot.com ) was having a little competition….I don’t usually like entering competitions, but love challenges nevertheless….
Now that the winners have been announced, I can post my entry on my blog and share with my readers…
I chose the topic ‘the very last drop’…

The very last drop that he shed
Was unfortunately on his death bed

He cried like a baby due to major regret
If only it wasn’t so hard to forget

The mistakes he’d made over and over
Turned his pride even lower and lower

From disrespecting his parents more than just once
To not performing salaah for countless of months

What will he answer to the one above
Who created him and even a dove

Who are we fooling when we drown in sin
Our worth is not befitting for even a bin

He cried for one more chance to relive
His aged grandparents he would try to serve

He’d fast in the blessed month as he should
He’ll give all his wealth and as much as he could

He’ll comfort his friends when they complained about life
he’ll treasure and value his ill treated wife

Its sad that his entire life can’t be undone
He tried to kill himself by using a gun

The time is up my dear friend
No more chances, it is the end

We have to face him sooner or later
He is none other than our Creator

Pray,cry,scream or hop
Nothings going to help….

Not even the very last tear DROP!

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22 thoughts on “the very last drop

  1. *confessions in a nappy bag ( nappyconfessions.blogspot.com ) was having a little competition….I don’t usually like entering competitions, but love challenges nevertheless….
    Now that the winners have been announced, I can post my entry on my blog and share with my readers…
    I chose the topic ‘the very last drop’…

    The very last drop that he shed
    Was unfortunately on his death bed

    He cried like a baby due to major regret
    If only it wasn’t so hard to forget

    The mistakes he’d made over and over
    Turned his pride even lower and lower

    From disrespecting his parents more than just once
    To not performing salaah for countless of months

    What will he answer to the one above
    Who created him and even a dove

    Who are we fooling when we drown in sin
    Our worth is not befitting for even a bin

    He cried for one more chance to relive
    His aged grandparents he would try to serve

    He’d fast in the blessed month as he should
    He’ll give all his wealth and as much as he could

    He’ll comfort his friends when they complained about life
    he’ll treasure and value his ill treated wife

    Its sad that his entire life can’t be undone
    He tried to kill himself by using a gun

    The time is up my dear friend
    No more chances, it is the end

    We have to face him sooner or later
    He is none other than our Creator

    Pray,cry,scream or hop
    Nothings going to help….

    Not even the very last tear DROP!

  2. sister/in/islam says:

    ‎​​ما شاء الله
    Absolutely beautiful !!!
    Btw sister – I also entered *cant look*
    ƗƗɐƗƗɐ…ƗƗɐƗƗɐ…

  3. A says:

    ما شاءالله sister very lovely post, u deserved to have won
    Hope ur blo gets sorted out quickly bcoz I’m having serious ‘foreveramessup’ withdrawals

  4. sister/in/islam says:

    Mine is really AMATEUR next 2 ur PROFESSIONAL one !!! Seriously ….. Just rote wateva came 2 mind n sent !!!!!!! I’m only good @ commenting on ur blog !!! ‎​ℓ☺ℓ

    Missing u much !!!

  5. sister/in/islam says:

    Mayb mrs author must write the posts as comments for now !!!!!
    =))˚°◦hahahaha . _\\_‎​​

    Cos that’s like da only way we can see wat she’s riting !!!!

  6. Sister A. says:

    Nice poem sis! We must value our time & spend it correctly or we will regret it °̩и our last moments of life. Then, even ɪ̇Ƒ we shed tears of blood it will be of no use. May ﷲ guide us all ​آمِيْن.

  7. Binte Ahmed says:

    Wow nice entry author..i must say I like ur entry more than the winning one..lol..but im not the judge now am I 😛
    Btw,i also entered..didnt win though lol

  8. Binte Ahmed says:

    Lol no way!!! *hide* I dnt think its good enuf anyways n im shy to share it..id rather be the reader of ur wonderful posts!!!xxx

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